A soul, crying for help,
can't go much further, but still strifes,
Why does it go on?
Feeling very tortured, very helpless,
wants a death that will not come,
Why does it fight on?
It fights by living, surviving,
Why does it fight hard without reason?
Because it's future lies ahead.
I thought I might try a haiku.
Once again, tell me what you think.
-Alex F
Once again, tell me what you think.
-Alex F
3 comments:
That was awesome! So are your other poems! ;)
(-.-")-Ethan
That's not Haiku format but is still is interesting. Hiaku is 5-7-5. Your first one was 6-8-5. Your second one was 10-7-5. Your third one was 8-9-8. Try rephrasing it.
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